From cswhiteartist@optonline.net Mon Apr  6 08:56:32 2015
Date: Mon, 06 Apr 2015 08:26:07 -0400
From: Christian White <cswhiteartist@optonline.net>
To: Tony Phillips <tony@math.sunysb.edu>
Cc: Lorraine Walsh <lwalsh@scgp.stonybrook.edu>
Subject: press release

Tony, I kind of liked the release Lorraine sent me, but I assume you wanted a shorter version? There were a couple things that I thought could be phrased differently: I didn't get the impression from the architects that the weight on the floor was the problem, since they were willing to build a whole other wall there in place with the stone on it; I thought it was the stability of the wall that was an issue. The project did take me almost three years altogether, but we finished the last cast almost exactly two years after we started carving the first slab of stone.

I am attaching my own attempt at re-phrasing what you sent me, just suggestions

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